Page three of the comic for my friend Tim! I haven’t talked about it much, but I’m using this comic as a sort of practice run for a relaunch of my other comic, Fyreball. I’m working on style, pacing, page breakdown, as well as some other more technical stuff; like, for example, various ways of using Manga Studio’s built-in panel cutter to build the frame of my pages.
I want to relaunch Fyreball with a stronger focus on telling an actual story instead of trying to squeeze a one-off joke into every page. My original plan was to just pick up whree I’d left off with the story and continue from there but I think I can tell a better story than the one I’d started. In fact, I know I can. So, keep an eye out for more updates on that.
For now, though, here’s another page in the developing plight of our heroes, Rayloth and Tymn!
Later!
–Ray
